Comments : You Belong With Me

  • 15 years ago

    by FountainsOfBlood

    Awww!!! <3<3
    What an amazing poem! How can you not like your poetry! The only slight flaw is the flow - some places either have too many syllables or too little but that isn't important as the emotion feeling that comes through in this.
    5/5
    ~FountainsOfBlood
    [Aka - You're Number One Fan]

  • 15 years ago

    by jane

    I love this poem so much it is just great

  • 15 years ago

    by claire

    I love the lines "You are the beat within my heart
    you are the blood beneath my skin"!!!!!!!!!! totally amazing!!!!

  • 15 years ago

    by Unamed

    This was absolutly beautiful!!!!
    i loved it!!!
    "You are the beat within my heart
    you are the blood beneath my skin
    so many unforgettable memories
    I don't know where to begin"

    ^^ i think that was my favorite!! it was really sweet!

    "What will happen to us, I don't know
    but I know my love is strong
    and I hope you will finally see
    that with me is where you belong"

    ^^ i thought that was really cute. i like how the first stanza and this were just almost alike, and it made anice effect.

    great job!

    5/5

    Aly

  • 15 years ago

    by Sourav

    I like this poem for it's theme and intensity. A well paced poem too. Nice one.

  • 15 years ago

    by shantavia

    This poem is really good i like it :)

  • 15 years ago

    by Hollywood

    Wow i loved this so much it was really great. i loved the way it flowed so neatly together.((5))

  • 15 years ago

    by MeltInHisArms

    ~You are the beat within my heart
    you are the blood beneath my skin
    so many unforgettable memories~
    I don't know where to begin
    absolutly beautiful lines! so perfessional and just...beautiful!!!
    such a beautiful poem. keep it up! 5/5
    xoxo
    ~waiting~

  • 15 years ago

    by biancaadropout x

    You're poems are really neat,i like them.

  • 15 years ago

    by XxHiis BooxX

    "you are the beat within my heart
    you are the blood beneath my skin
    so many unforgettable memories"

    Luv that part just all in all a well written poem
    great choice of words very thang great job..5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Sora

    Awh this was really sweet.
    a beautiful write indeed!

    You are the beat within my heart
    you are the blood beneath my skin
    so many unforgettable memories
    I don't know where to begin

    i loved that stanza! it was lovelyy.
    job well done.

    -Ashlei.

  • 15 years ago

    by Amanda Jo

    Awww! this poem is really sweet. i can feel the emotion you put into it. beautifully written. keep it up. 5/5