Comments : This little girl

  • 16 years ago

    by NAmE eMiLY lOvIN hIM

    Wow that gave me goosebumps. :] i liked it alot. i hope thats not realy how you feel. and i can relate so much.
    great poem

    <3 alwyas,
    emiliy

  • 15 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Thats really good i liked the repeated bits it worked well. and the ending is very strong cliffhanging type. well done xx

  • 15 years ago

    by A F

    Suicide is never the answer honey..

  • 15 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    I would prefer to ponder the problem rather than the answer
    Yet our feelings are our own. They are neither moral nor immoral
    It is what we do with our feelings that will make the difference
    I hope I do not sound judgmental because I belong to a support group that searches for answers to the question of self harm. I am not here to fix your feelings though I would if I could. Honesty is a form of true sharing. Thank you for sharing
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