Wow that was full of emotion...It bought tears to my eyes I kno a giel who went thru the same thing she ended up takein her life...
well done great writting!!
xoxo

Hey babe this is a really good poem! deserves so much more comments!

your flow was flawless thought i did lose it a little in the 8th stanza! love it hunny!

"weeks go by with out food
still no one seems to see
this did help her request
to destroy who she used to"
^^
Great description! and so ture!

"so she's just this little girl
with simply just a heart
shes now another fallen angel
thats all broken apart..... "
^^ great ending to a great poem well done =)

~ This Mask I Hold Is Not Held Tight ~

I have to say this was an awesome poem, really. Looking forward to reading more...

Wow! such an emotional story. very well written.... keep up the good work :-)

Good i lilke that your telling a complete story even though your ryhme scheme faltered a little it still flowed pretty good but i dont use rhyme schemes so i have no room to talk and it was a good work over all