Where was my mind

by neo   May 2, 2008


Simply INTERTWINED
all bound up with my heart
we all have a weakness
I now know what is mine
My newfound ability to love and trust.
Crazy how so many get confused by LUST
I waited for time to heal all wounds
Now my wounds are scars
Unlike the self inflicted ones I bear on my arms
But scars that cannot be seen
Love is now a feet
I must now rise above all this
Love is pain
Love is Bliss
I will not give up
Life like love is a game
It's either Hit or Miss

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  • 15 years ago

    by claire

    This is really good - just so you know tho the way you used "feat" its not spelled "feet" anyway great writing :)

  • 16 years ago

    by she

    You are so strong, good flow, excellant job

  • 16 years ago

    by elwood

    Wonderful flow 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by H E Losey

    I think your idea holds merit but ift seems your rythm gets choppy Do you mean to use the word "feet"? Also is your weakness to "love and to trust" or to do these without thought?

  • 16 years ago

    by BryanLovesKaye

    Crazy how so many get confused by LUST

    THis is line is so TRUE :)
    nice Lines :)
    keep it up....

    5/5 *Clap*

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