In My Dreams

Wow!! dreams sometimes look enchanted!! i like it!! 5/5

I am rather conflicted on whether I liked this piece of not. The cliche concept of only being able to see, feel, experience, etc. a loved one in dreams made me groan, since it's rather overused. But as your repetition made it more effective, more emotional, more potent, it made me rethink my opinion on the piece. And then you ended it, and I was rather disappointed. It gave a lot, but it was so straightforward -- I didn't feel too much ... "showing" instead of telling, and I was expecting more.

..__MiNDYY

I absolutely loved it.....romantic yet not too much....great job with this one! ^_^

Waw ,i realy like the way you write it and always in my dream,flow was good and beautiful picture you paint with this words make me see your dream like i watch move,you did great jop and you deserve 5/5