Waw its great and sweet,i have no comment on how you write it as beautiful word did everything but i see when you write:
and I'll love you till the die i die
i think you mean:
and I'll love you till the day i die
but other than that i have nothing well done 5/5

The flow and rhythm and rhyme is flawless the content has a sweet and cute sentiment

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Nice job i liked the rhythm of the poem great job! 5/5