Veryyyy good! it almost made me cry cus i can relate. people can be so heartless and not give a damn and sometimes all you need is for someone to just ask you if your ok

This made me cry. No lie, it was just that good. I really liked this it had a lot of emotion in it.

See, there was once this girl,
who more than anything wanted love
she tried like hell, but lost her way.
so she drew her pain in blood.

^^^This was my favorite stanza. It made me want to read it over and over again. you have talent. 5/5
~Forever Broken~

OMG I LOVE THIS ONE.............
i can relate to it and i get it....
you have ALOT of talend and i know how it feel to wonder if any one cares..
all you need is some one to show you that you can talk to them but sometimes they cant even tell what wrong or they just dont bother to ask..........
5/5