Its really well written! 5/5!

I like it a lot and i can definetly relate... its good... dont worry about anything you write being bad... it can never be bad.. keep writing and ill keep reading....

I can't keep hurting like this.
I've go to let it go.
I don't know what I've held on for.
I just know I can't do this anymore.

i love love love this verse
and the last one
they both describe what i went through with my bf of 2 and a half years
it hurts sometimes but you do what you know has to be done...
5/5 girly!
i also nominated/voted for it in the weekly poetry contest : )

I like it.
its very good.

I really liked it.....and it feels like i can relate to that....really good

Thanks for the comment
i think its a great poem especially since u wrote it in a hurry
i relly like the second and third stanze and can relate. ive been trina say goodbye to someone for a couple months now
just 1 thing-you said ive go to let it instead of ive got to let it in the third stanza besides that i think its perfect =) 5/5

I've got to put you out of my mind,
So that I can move on with my life.
~~
So for the last time,
Let me look into your eyes.
And try to convince my heart
That it is time to say...GOOD-BYE
~~
Loved those parts. 5/5! It was wonderful especially been written in a hurry!
great job keep it up

It's good! i can so relate! Keep writing!

It was good......it seems that u've xperienced it....ooooppppsssss! no negative on der......keep it up

I really like this poem its very good since u wrote it in a hury I can really relate keep up the good work

I LOVED IT...IT WAS GREAT....

It's nice to read. Very well written... :)

Its hard to let ones you love go,but it happends i think u did a great job writting a poem w good emotion with it with everything ur going through(or that u wrote about). keep it up! 5/5 always
Kate~

This poem is fantastic it really is.And if this is really happening to you glad that you are moving on with your life, and some day the boy that you liked will see that he lost someone with a good heart.=)

No problem even though itz written in a hurry... it looks to be d best...

keep writing,

best wishz...

Karan

That was really sad.. I know it's painful to lose an important person and to see how that person can move on with their life, while you are still not letting go. But it's life, and hard as it may seem, the sooner you do the same the sooner you'll realise how many other boys deserve your love and would make you truly happy. Anyway, you seem ready now to say good-bye, so good luck and be happy!

Beautiful poem, i can totally relate, keep it up!
Best wishes,

TILLmyLASTtearFALLS

Thnx for the comment and i really liked your poem it was hot because my friend could relate to it.

This is really good i love it

i love the rhyming in it

Totally relate to this one!! it is like the story of my Life!! LOL!!