YOU are a true poet this poem rules
I COULD'ND stop reading it 5/5

This reminded me of Korn's music video "Falling Away From Me". http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hU2zfDFjffo

i think you would appreciate it if you havnt seen it before, exspecially because of what the song is about.

this poem left me speechless. very effective impact at the end. it seemed a bit unfinished, but i like it that way. leave room for the mind to wonder.

5/5 ~Ben