Look at me

Wow I really liked this one!
5/5 keep it up!

Nicely written. Short, sweet but still with a melodic effect overall. Keep it up! 5/5

I liked the shortness of this poem, however; I also felt that you could've elaborated and made this into a longer poem which would've suited it better in my opinion.

Also, You didn't use any puncuation. Puncuation helps the flow as well as the overall structure of the poem.

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Just look at me
Really look at me
Look not in my eyes
But in my soul
For if you look there
Your soul will find its mate.

^^Ok as I stated above puncuation is a big part of poetry, so for example:

Just look at me,
Really look at me.
Look not in my eyes
But in my soul;
For if you look there
Your soul will find its mate.

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Short and to the point, nice little write, keep up the good work.

Peace, Joe

Very interesting, seen it before but everytime I read poetry like this it's always a surprise and original, very powerful yet short, keep it up I'm looking forward to reading more.

Short. nice. to the point. made sense. gave me a smile =].

over all ill give it a 5/5