Very well done but error in second part. spelling is important. EVERY*

Awww this is really sweet :3
other than the one spelling error, well done!
5/5 from me, keep it up

Loved it well done xx

A poem that has all d herculean arts n who wud not want to do impossible things possible just 2 give a smile to sumone... sumone special...

Lovely though n lovely poem,

keep writing,

best wishz.... Karan

Would do anything in this universe,
and baby, i swear that is true,
but no matter what i try,
ive already went and lost you.

this stanza is such a great stanza.. and such a sad poem.. its so deep writing... and im almost want to cry.. cuz its realy relates to me.. excellent
5/5