Really good poem. A lot of emotion.. Typo in your title though lol. But good poem. 5/5

This is a great poem.
at the beginning i was confused but once i got to the end i understood it.
it seemed like at the end you lost the rythem but its still a good poem.

This was a really great poem
Beautifully written
keep it up okay
5/5

I love this poem it reminds me of my brother!! great write!! 5/5

I love your insight to life . Your poetry has such an easy flow and never loses its point. please never stop writing