Nice work. once again you have a good sence and flow, structure and show your feelings. 5/5

I Really Like This Poem...Its Clear...I Understand It Very Well...Great Job..{5/5}

I thought this poem was very simplistic and sweet. The flow had allowed it to be a an easy read, and the message was very clear to understand. The emotions are also easily strong as well. Nice work.

Very sweet poem.
a lovely write.
you made it clear to understand what you were trying to say.
very good job!