This is really Amazing write n it says alot.
Good job!!!
Keep up the good work.

God bless u

Good poem bro
it explains alot since you want to be a doctor

but me and you know that death can't be controlled. only God can
you just have to do what you can and leave the rest to God

Its good that u wnna be a doctor..but doctors cannot stop death..nor can you only God can..n da reason why doctors suceed in helping person not to die do is coz GOD PLANNED IT...so doctors only follow what God permits n what He doesnt permits..doesnt live...Good poem by the way..really good...

This was a brillant piece. the flow was great, and the subject was perfect to write about. i loved it!

To extend their lives
And rid them from their pain
To see their loved ones
And new memories to gain

i loved that stanza, it really stuck out to me. and it also held alot of meaning. you did a wonderful job on this one. kepp up the great work! 5/5.

-Ashlei.

OMG.What a wonderful piece.It was so touching.I want to be a doctor too and I know how hard it is to be a doctor,you may see daeth everyday as you explained in your beautiful poem.I also think about death and how much it hurts many people,but this is life.

Give you my vote.5\5.