You've written it so well. Good structure and good rhyme. Very well done!

I like this poem.

You've structured it really well and the rhythm suits it.

I also like how it was based off Tomorrow When the War Began, I didn't see it at first (thought you were just talking about the world in general), but after reading that it was, I could see it straight away.

Good on you!

I like this poem.

You've structured it really well and the rhythm suits it.

I also like how it was based off Tomorrow When the War Began, I didn't see it at first (thought you were just talking about the world in general), but after reading that it was, I could see it straight away.

Good on you!

Great description and usage of words! You did fantastic on this poem, and please post more up!