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Wow,this poem is really fantastic!
In the last stanza, "you're" should be "your"
but otherwise this poem is wonderful!
"Go on before it sucks her soul, Kiss her tears away"
i love this line the most.
Amazing job! 5/5
by MERCY is never shown
Wow! this is really amazing it has really deep pain and hurt its kinda depressing but in a good poetical way
Wow that was a very powerful poem you wrote, mashallah.
very descriptive and well written
Excellent Work! :)
I love the description and the perfect use of vocabulary here!
Keep up the great work! :)
WOnderful i love this one too ive only read three of your poems now but they are beautiful your a wonderful writer
"Bruises crawl beneath her delicate skin
An emotional virus rips her heart"
i like how you put the emotional pain as a virus ripping her apart
overall a great poem 5/5 again :)
by XXmizz juiceXX
Love dis poem its nice :}
I really like this poem, your phrasing and word choice are wonderful and you paint some very vivid images with your words :)
the first i've read from you and i look forward to reading more.Great job