Wow,this poem is really fantastic!

In the last stanza, "you're" should be "your"
but otherwise this poem is wonderful!

"Go on before it sucks her soul, Kiss her tears away"

i love this line the most.

Amazing job! 5/5

Wow! this is really amazing it has really deep pain and hurt its kinda depressing but in a good poetical way

Wow that was a very powerful poem you wrote, mashallah.

Love this
very descriptive and well written
5/5

Very descriptive.
Very powerful
Very interesting
Very AMAZING!!

Well Done!

WOWW !!
Excellent Work! :)
I love the description and the perfect use of vocabulary here!

Keep up the great work! :)

5/5.

WOnderful i love this one too ive only read three of your poems now but they are beautiful your a wonderful writer

"Bruises crawl beneath her delicate skin
An emotional virus rips her heart"

i like how you put the emotional pain as a virus ripping her apart

overall a great poem 5/5 again :)

Love dis poem its nice :}

I really like this poem, your phrasing and word choice are wonderful and you paint some very vivid images with your words :)

the first i've read from you and i look forward to reading more.

Great job

Ben