Comments : Kiss her tears away

  • 13 years ago

    by Heba

    Wow,this poem is really fantastic!

  • 13 years ago

    by stillmomsgirl

    In the last stanza, "you're" should be "your"
    but otherwise this poem is wonderful!

    "Go on before it sucks her soul, Kiss her tears away"

    i love this line the most.

    Amazing job! 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by MERCY is never shown

    Wow! this is really amazing it has really deep pain and hurt its kinda depressing but in a good poetical way

  • 12 years ago

    by SashaMirage

    Wow that was a very powerful poem you wrote, mashallah.

  • 12 years ago

    by stillmomsgirl

    Love this
    very descriptive and well written

  • 12 years ago

    by ChloeLauren

    Very descriptive.
    Very powerful
    Very interesting
    Very AMAZING!!

    Well Done!

  • 12 years ago

    by Annaam

    WOWW !!
    Excellent Work! :)
    I love the description and the perfect use of vocabulary here!

    Keep up the great work! :)


  • 11 years ago

    by P00ki3B3ar

    WOnderful i love this one too ive only read three of your poems now but they are beautiful your a wonderful writer

    "Bruises crawl beneath her delicate skin
    An emotional virus rips her heart"

    i like how you put the emotional pain as a virus ripping her apart

    overall a great poem 5/5 again :)

  • 10 years ago

    by XXmizz juiceXX

    Love dis poem its nice :}

  • 3 years ago

    by Ben

    I really like this poem, your phrasing and word choice are wonderful and you paint some very vivid images with your words :)

    the first i've read from you and i look forward to reading more.

    Great job