Beautiful poem bro. I love it!!! XD *hugs*

It was funny little poem kinda quirky lol

firstly i don't no what these are:
DBHS
Sophomores
Freshmen

any way there was also some grammar mistakes,

being quite and listing to the teacher.-

quiet
listening
teachers (because then the second line don't make sense if it ain't plural)

two withs in the 3rd and 4th lines.
two buts also

the whole poem, is like it was wrote in a joing way, which i take it, it was :s