Comments : Mixed Emotion (rap)

  • 15 years ago

    by Jennifer RIP Lesthat Hayden

    Ooo, I love the personification you used when he said life hated you. Very good line. Creative.

    The a man without worries line was good too.

    Aww, that was a sweet poem. :) You care so much for her, I can tell. I only hope that you feel better and find someone, or Harlea, to take care of you and love you.

    4 out of 5.

  • 15 years ago

    by X Harlea X

    Nice

  • 15 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    I can tell a lot of effort went into this, i think people who can write lyrics this well are just so fab!! well done. excellent work xx