I like.

A great statement. Honestly ive written the same kind of stuff, and its a way of telling the world, "YOUR HERE", and there isnt anything they can do. =]
Good work

-Kaitlyn

I jus want 2 b me..... lovely topic n excellent write..

keep writing..

best wishz... karan

Very good read, though serious for the most part the closure brought a chuckle.
The only thing that I could think to change would be the use of "i" for the pronoun I, but then I'm old and it is just an opinion.

I like your poem alot.....specially the last stanza!
Keep it up and write down as many lively poems as you can!
I'm sure you will do better!
Maida!

I liked how you ended it with good night. lol. I could see you turning over to the lamp and hitting the lights as it all fades to black. a 5/5 poem indeed.