Very touching and sincere but yet there was sadness and confusion and hurt among the joy, beautifully written.
There were parts that could of flowed better, and you could change things to make this piece outstanding as in the words you chose even though they work as they are they could be better.

Good work,
Kaitlyn

Sad but buetiful

I enjoyed this poem this poem could be entered in tell your story contest dhs story

You are still are baby, the cutest of all,

One too many ares in there and stick in an a. :)

Why are you jealous of him? Because ignorance is bliss?

This was a lovely poem. The rhyming was a bit ADD, but besides that. It was lovely. I could picture every heartbreaking and heartwarming moment in this poem. It was perfect. Five out of five.

Thanks lol, I didnt notice that. I need to remember to check poems before I submit them. I'm doing that now. But when I wrote this I didnt. lol thank you