It's dark. wow. It was really well written though.
I like the big words you put in there. And it put a smile on my face when you said "no more games of footsies."
Great write Nathan!

Oooh.
I love this, Batman.
So dark.. and your vocabulary was amazing. Love love loooove this poem. ^.^

Keep writing!
Cayce

Short but meaningful...Good Job

Hey this is great!! I love it! Keep up the good work! Check out some of my poems!

I love it!

You know how I feel about ur poetry check out my new poems

I like,no wait, I love it.
Its really well written.
Imma go read more of your poems.

-Tori
♥

I loved the colors , black but then u talk about white.
contraste loved it

oooo dark hi hi n_n
keep writing !!!

Good job....I liked the way u wrote it..keep it up5/5