Comments : Who wants to live forever

  • 16 years ago

    by Mello193

    This was so cute and sad too. It had a sound of distain and then you finished it off greatly. Awesome as always

    -mello193

  • 16 years ago

    by WaitAutumn

    ^^' i think i've read almost all your poems now lol
    aaa i just love the way you see things, and describe them !

    -Who wants to live forever?
    When forever is so long- simple but true.
    n_n very nice poem

  • 16 years ago

    by Goth marionette

    That is so great..I did like it ..keep it up5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Sarah

    Wow ... I'll have to tell you that I didn't see this ending coming. It was a great twist ! You've managed your lines very well, in a way the convinced the reader ,somehow, that hope still exist even in a dark & empty world such as ours.... 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Dark Secrets

    Awww, that's soo sweet.
    Great right... keep it up

  • 15 years ago

    by blackheartslove

    I LOVE this! :] its perfectly written and totally captures the audience and draws you in. your poems are all so amazing! you are such a good writer. you reali should get some stuff published. this one is def one of my favs tho. :]

  • 15 years ago

    by jojo88

    Diffent but good 4/3

  • 15 years ago

    by jojo88

    Diffent but good 4/5

  • 15 years ago

    by jojo88

    Diffent but good 4/5