I liked it.....it was good.but i do think that you need to fix..the first stanza like girl and put girlfriend

I like it lol alot better

Pretty interesting, caring about your friend, missing the friendship. Wouldn't be best friend like used to cause the bond wasn't strong like it was. Lacking off interest between two because a girl step beside but who decided to change. Your friend did.

I loving this. Keep it up!

Great job dude.. Your a great friend.. I think you should talk to him. Well.. great job dude.

I like it. You kinda lost me tho like half way thru. so i had to re-read it and now i'm unlost. lol. but good job. =]

you should check out some of mine some time.

-ashley