I enjoyed reading this poem, the beginning was great but you kind of lost me at the end. i like the language and the personality put inot the poem. Good work

I loved reading this poem. Fantastic work.

Wow intense
really intense

good

kiwi

wanna read mine?

Very well written, Very sad, but short, Lots of emotion shoved in there, and i like the wrhymes.... You hsould check out some of mine

cheers!!:)
Maddi

Wow. i can totally relate to that. an amazing poem. it was raw and powerful and i love it. 5/5. the rhyming was fabulous. keep it up. ~KM~