Nicely done ^^ Simple and to the point, but still shows a great message.

I think you could make this poem even better if ya expand on it, but save that for another time, I think ^^ It's great the way it is
4/5

UzumakiPride
Hatori

Nise but needs more words in it but i like it very nice

Pretty good poem :)!
short but really quite good.
4/5

I like this... alotta strength but u know some things can change as long as its not all of u :)