Well... this is very interesting poem. It's nicely written. Enjoyable...

Addiction... A lovely theme around which the whole poem plot revolves.. liked it..

keep it up,

best wishz.. karan

I agree with Dante, you are a very skilled goet hehe. This poem shows how much your talent as grown.
5/5

Cheers xo

This sounds like a crush and I love it a whole lot. I often wonder if men see us as their addiction. What sucks is that he doens't know it.

Nice flow n_n very cute in my opinion
keep writing this was good