Hey, I really enjoyed your poem. Its simple yet very real subject is fundementally enlightening, and your use of rhyme and rhythm really helps the poem flow. You alternated the syllables per line, but only slightly. It gave the poem (at least in my mind) a river-like sense of flowing. There might have been a few errors, and you might want to fix those up, but all in all I thought this was a really good poem.

AWESOME POEm lol keep writing

Thank you for commenting on my poem, and I think you are a talented writer, I gave u a 5 =)
Hope to see more of your work.

hi, I like your poem.. it's very god..
I would be happy if you checked out my poems and comment and rate..
I Would mean so much to me..

I gave you a 5-

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Hey...
that was a great poem. I think you did a really good job. Keep up the awsome work. I look forward to reading more of your poems
Martty

Wow.. Nice poem.. You really did a good job! I can't wait to see some more of your work!!

I thought I might go ahead and comment since you commented on mine. I thought your poems was awesome!!! So true!!!
Cobabe

Such a relaxing poem. Wonderfully written.
The words are words of peace.
Excellent.
-David

I liked the poem it was really good.

Great poem. It was really relaxing. Good job.

P.S Thanks for the comment

Stacey^-^

This is a really good poem keep it up dont stop writing thnx on what you said about my poem

hey, thanx for looking at my poems, this poem is beautiful, and i love the way you catch nature. you are a great poet.

oh wow.. thanx everyone i have never had so many people think one of my poems are as good as what you are saying it really means alot to me!!