Wonderful poem
i guess every girl wishes for the same thing and i am very happy that you found your ONE GUY

i enjoyed the poem and the ryhme too

I enjoyed this read and feel it was a stroy well told.
Just ideas as I read:
line 8 "that" to "those"
line 19 "because" to "now that"
line 26 "could've been" to could be"
Last stanza too many "that"s, they disrupt the rhythm.
As always these are just my opinion.

I thought the poem was pretty cliche.
It's just the words you chose.
You could've made it more exciting.
More... something.

Like hurtful game.
Yeah, we've heard love's hurtful.
You don't have to repeat it, y'know?

You can use more details.
Don't use the same words over and over.
Crying.
My soul flowing out my eyes.

I don't know.
I know that's lame.
But pout your own spin in it :]

I'm want to give this a three.
It deserves a three.
But I don't want to mean.

I'll put in a five.

This is the kind of cute poem that has a nice balance on seemingly happy feelings in it
The bliss of romantic desire simply expressed

Good work

Great job. Thia poem was really cute and hopeful if you know what I mean. I think a lot of girls can relate to this. Rhyming was good as well as the flow. 5./5 from me

The flow was off in a couple places and there are too many I's and filler words. In some parts it seems your rhyming was forced. It was a piece I am sure will be liked though as many can relate to it.