This is very good. they had a strong hold in what they wanted to say and had an excellent use in there language. good jobs to them 5/5

Well he did a fantastic job... a very wonderful thought provoking write...

keep it up

best wishz... karan

Good job! i love it

Your friend wrote this? Does he have an account on here? Because he is a great writer.

Wow. ur friend is an excellent writer.
i love this.
&& tell him i said that.

great job&&keep it up.
much love,
mac.<3
[.just.another.silly.teenage.girl.]

Wow he is an excellent writer!!
this poem is different from anything ive ever heard before but i love it!

Well i enjoyed it was not bored