I like it, i like the concept of self destruction. well written 5/5

This is not bad, expressed in a way I haven't seen. Really is a nice way to put each feeling with the problem.

Strongly written..

Awsom write. It seems like a real life experience. Sweet. Keep it up.

I like it but not the !!! all the time.
also you wrote going instead of DOING
good base though.

Well done. loved the different theme to it =)