i kno it is not a story it was supposed to be a poem lol

seemed more like a story to me. umm, but its a great "poem"

Hey it did sound like a story.. but did this really happen? that is so sad if it did.. even though it sounded like a story it still brang a tear to my eyes to think that some people are like that..

Very interesting story. Maybe you should post it in fictionpress.com
You certainly have the ability to write them. Of course your style needs improvement, but so does ours.
Read the strories there first, then submit it
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If it was suppose to be a poem, it needs a little editing I suppose. Space out the sections, make it a little easier to read.
-Peace

kk i will take your advice thanks

nice poem, long but interesting. good job

lol
i didnt mean that i wus weird that day but thx luv heather