Loveliest poem in d chain of most loveliest poems...

It was really amazing,

Keep it up,

best wishes..

karan

Very sweet and lovely poem, liked it very much. i've read a lot of poems and yours caught my attention. i can relate to this poem,
standing next to her and wondering if her heart was beating as fast as mines. like that part very much. keep up the good work.
5/5

Oh you spelled breath wrong, just wanted to point that out. the poem is still great, just thought you just wanted to know, that's all.