Pare astig.

Wooooow .. what a cool one
so emotional so perfect
... t.c

Cutee poem (:

I loved the first verse.

Haha. Antaray mu aldrin.

Witwiw. wla lng

Wow thats really deep! i love it! =)

Great work man, reminds me of myself in so many ways. This is definately a 5/5 in my book because it seems to flow well without rhyming, but then kicks in with some well placed rhymes near the end