You created truly nice rhythm from the beginning to the end and did a good job with rhymes. Also, I your choice of words through the whole piece. The imagery is very vivid and you portrayed truly captivating images that unraveled along with poem and captured my attention.

The whole atmosphere of this poem is memorable, truly powerful. Overall, this is very enjoyable read, greatly written from the beginning to the end.

My favorite stanza is:

- A creature with wings flies above the clouds;
Obsession engraved within its mind.
The mortal heads upon the heavens,
Wishing the Gift of the Goddess it will find.-
^^^
Vivid and intense, very refreshing, too.

5/5 from me

I felt as though I was reading something deeply inspired. Very well written The flow is outstanding

This was amazing...I didn't find any errors^^

Great great job

As the wicked haunts him day by day,
The past torments him by the hour
--favorite part
this poem was great from begening to end

WOW......THAT WAS SO CREATIVE............LOVED IT......:)

"Death will not stop it, nor fire or rain,
For this roaming spirit knows no ease.
Its heart hardened by years and time.
Yet this spirit's purpose it will seize"
That was so beautiful, I love this poem and It flowed so well I give it a 5*5