U and Me

by Bec   May 18, 2008


That morning whisper
A gentle kiss
A suspended moment
Of perfect bliss

That precious feeling
As eyes first meet
Bodies entwined
In sleepy heat

Fingers touching
Breath as one
Hearts in rhythm
We greet the sun

Content, in truth
Just to be
Simply enjoying
You and me

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  • 17 years ago

    by LoreNz0

    This poem brings such a sweet and pleasant scene to life.with the brilliant wording and flow the reader is able to feel the passion and enjoy every line. ab fab 5*

  • 17 years ago

    by im not the cause

    Wow good really erotic

  • 17 years ago

    by daniel

    I like this alot

    the flow is great and it all ties togethar very well

    i like your style

    -Daniel

  • 17 years ago

    by The Dark Poet

    I love love love it...
    Thnkz...
    and keep them coming like i said youll do good
    cause this was perfect

  • 17 years ago

    by Mello193

    This was amazing....ur awesome ^u^

    Sweet poem

    Kudoos

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