I love this poem so much !
Great work !!

This was a nice poem
"She takes my breath away.
But only when its the day."
I think that you could have used something else instead of "but only when its the day"
Other then that it was a nice read
I give it a 4 out of 5
- Maria xx

Had To read the ending a few times to understand it, but it's nice

Had To read the ending a few times to understand it, but it's nice

This was really good : - ) , good job.

This poem made me cry...

makes me think of him...

='S

great poem tho andre, very heartfelt.

*applause* =))