Comments : Dead Man's Future

  • 11 years ago

    by Lemon Squeezy

    Nice poem i think u added a few extra words here and there might want 2 fix those but goood job it said what u wanted it to say.

  • 11 years ago

    by MissMeg

    Wow hun i really liked that, it was like perfect and it meant a lot. you speak the truth when u say we dnt know when our time may come. very good write. keep it up hun.

    this part really spoke to me:
    life is to short
    for things not to get said
    there is no way to abort
    but you to will be dead

    Speak your mind
    mean what you say
    always be kind
    you never know when its your day

    great job
    5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by PoetryKnight

    Sound like you are thinking alot of what if. seems like you have a problem, j/k. but it was an awsome write. keep it up.

  • 11 years ago

    by Mackenzie

    Wow.
    this is SOOO true.

    and i loved it. 5/5.

    great job && keep it up.

    *all smiles*

    mac.

  • 11 years ago

    by Spiker 03

    Hey! I like this one. it does show us that life is way to short and we need to live it, not just watch it pass by. 5/5 keep up your great work! luv always.~~

  • 11 years ago

    by she

    Good message i think you wrote very well
    liked it alot because, it's very true

  • 11 years ago

    by Bugg

    Wow, really good poem! Semi-trucks are bad news. My boyfriend and I got hit by one when we were going to Memphis one day. He had to get 49 stitches (the truck hit his side). I loved the message in this poem. It was really powerful. 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Kevin

    Really makes ya think about the future and things u wish u could say,should have said, or not said. nice meaning

  • 10 years ago

    by Cassie Cain

    Great poem. i really liked this one. lol. keep up the good work and keep in touch. lates. ^_^

  • 10 years ago

    by Cassie Cain

    Great poem. i really liked this one. lol. keep up the good work and keep in touch. lates. ^_^