Take a breath
Count to five
Keep this failing
Heart alive
--fav. part
the flow was amazing
i love this poem, so relatable
5/5

Beautifully written. Flowing is extremely well done.
I can't wait to read more of your work.

Loved everything about this poem. Starting with the flow, which was absolutely perfect. Also, your choice of vocabulary was amazing
Overall, perfectly and beautifully written
5/5

Wow...
this prince charming guy really makes me think of Kyle...
I love it!
It's exactly how i feel... :]

Keep it going!
Sophie

WOW! that was truly beautiful! i love it its flows so well and great emotion!!!!

Wow gabby

Thats just

How do you manage to get so much power into all your poems?