Oh,simply perfect, 5/5

Short but well written, keep it up

5/5

Its short
but the meaning is clear
i liked it :)

Thnx for ur commnet..so i'm goign to return the fave...in commnet this wonderful poem of ur...One thing "did you really cry when you read my poem Because??anyways my fave part of this poem is:

"but truth catches you, whispering in you ear
you will be fine someday dear.
the tear they crash
the teeth the gnash
thats all you know
all you can show"

Love that part...