Comments : My First Love.

  • 13 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    Another great poem. So many emotions. A nice rhyme. Great rhythm. Length was great and you definatly got the reader into the poem. This poem was another one I enjoyed of yours. :] The only thing I would change is change your &'s to ands.. but, if that's just not how you write.. then I wouldn't. We all have our ways and styles of writing.

  • 13 years ago

    by Sora

    Wow i loved this poem! it's beautifully written, and i love the way you write, i also love the emotion your able to show. great work! =]

  • 12 years ago

    by Angel in moonlight

    This is a very excellent poem. I can really relate great job!!!!!