Amazing poem. Truly beautiful. I loved it. 5/5 I would say so much more, but I'm just bloody speechless! :)

Jeannie,
First, Oh how I have missed you and your poetry so much.
Second, nothing but the best as usual. I found myself having to re read the poem to get the flow of it, (only cuz I am stupid like that) but once I did and found it the poem did not let me down. wonderful job

Take Care, Kay

This poem is beautifully written. it has a dark beauty to it and it's very creatively written.
syntactically this is amazing

A very well written. I've found it very thoughtful and creative. Well done.