by girly May 23, 2008
category :
Love, romance /
first love
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It was you who took me by the hand |
by Rachel RTVW
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Lacks flow and all your rhyming is forced. Too many filler words...... |
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Awww that is sooooo good!!!! I loved it! =) |
by mandy
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That's really beautiful, |