MORE THAN A YEAR

by Silent   May 23, 2008


It has been more than a year
Since I first fell in love.
I still remember
the look on your face
and the things that you said.
I wasnt supposed to talk to you.
I wasnt supposed to care.
You changed the way I am
and the way I act.
You took me by the hand.
You never let me go.
I was too shy to tell you
And you never told me.
You told your brother
and I did the same.
He didn't tell you
And he never told me.
I told him to tell you
on the very last day
the day i thought
would be the last day to see you
but i was wrong with
my cousin and your brother
knowing they'll last forever
we see each other more and more often

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  • 15 years ago

    by Dan Bloom

    This is a great poem, but the caps locked is so distracting. When i read it, I'm yelling the words in my head. I would make it into sentences.

    Also, I would change the abbreviations... UR to you're and GONNA C U to going to see you

    I'll do it for you so you can see if you like it that way or not. You can just copy and paste if you do.

    More Than A Year
    It has been more than a year
    Since I first fell in love.
    I still remember
    the look on your face
    and the things that you said.
    I wasnt supposed to talk to you.
    I wasnt supposed to care.
    You changed the way I am
    and the way I act.
    You took me by the hand.
    You never let me go.
    I was too shy to tell you
    And you never told me.
    You told your brother
    and I did the same.
    He didnt tell you
    And he never told me.
    I told him to tell you
    but the last day I thought (doesnt make sense)
    was the day I was going to see you
    [I LOVE YOU BABY 6/23/7]

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