Intence, really well written 5/5

This is good. It's got some grammatical errors that you may want to check for, but the purpose is good. It's very sad and very very relatable. good job.

Really like it it's sweet and sad at the same time 10/5 lol xD

Great write, well done 5/5

Very deep poem, i can see feel the emotion flow out of every word. great job

5/5

It is a very emotional poem, but some of your structure was off! but all in all a very well thought out piece 5/5

It is a very emotional poem, but some of your structure was off! but all in all a very well thought out piece 5/5

Wow, that was awesome. Keep on writing. <3