Wow that was really good, but so sad. i'll bet she knows how much you miss her. this piece was so emotional. i especially love the last 2 lines :)

This is amazing....I love the style of your writing...And thanks for the comments!

Mark what a well written piece! I can tell by the content It was an unavoidable release, but you have realy expressed this piece so well. It flowed definitively! Your choice of words are great . 5/5
I am sorry for your loss my friend

That was very moving. I loved the way you played the words, and how you showed emotion.

Awe..omighosh i loved it, and even with the no emotion, there is. it was sad, and well written, alot better than what i can do! haha.

i thought since u commented and rated mine, i'd do the same. but u did wway better. lol

-Ally