I Love your astronomical metaphors about one of the the three most powerful words in the universe. This poem also makes me think of how easily these words are spoken and the significance of the degree of truth

excellent well thought out theme 5>>>>

Wow, I like it.. and It's really meaningful!

Another deep and meaningful piece. there is so much honesty about what the words "i love you" can mean. i wonder what it means to Daimon...

5/5

wonderful piece!

Keep Writing, hun
As Always,
~NinjaGirl~

Opens up a door
Between the truth and a lie
Itâ??s you who can only distinguish
Your real intention
--love this part because its so true, and i liked how you described it
i also like how you put the three words then talk about them in a good and bad way
good poem