Lost Without You [[thanks to Lost N Love]]

by Mackenzie   May 24, 2008


Was I doing too much?
Or was I blinded by love?
I thought you were my angel,
That was sent from above.

I guess it was my fault.
I really don't know.
I loved you so much.
And wasn't ready for you to go.

I think I'm going crazy.
But only for you.
I've lost all sense of direction,
What do I do?

I curve to the left,
And veer to the right.
I don't know where I'm going.
I'm just trying to overcome the fright.

The thought of losing you,
Scares me to death.
Without you,
It's like there is nothing left.

I loved you so much.
More than any words could say.
All I really and truly wanted,
Was for you to stay.

But you had to leave me here,
In shock and in fright.
You just left me here,
In the darkness of the night.

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  • 15 years ago

    by SuperGalacticLoveChild

    That is an amazing poem! alot of girls and women can relate to it. I believe you should call it "Lost Without You." Just a thought.

  • 15 years ago

    by Lemon Square Bear23

    Blinded by love? for a title idk, an idea. nice write u did a great job keep up the work.
    5/5 always
    Kate~LSB23

  • 15 years ago

    by Zoe

    Wow
    i loved thisss.
    it's like MY heart wrote itt.
    explaining EXACTLY what i'm feelingg
    but no...it was you
    i thought it was perfect
    in every sense of the word.
    i loved it.
    5/5
    keep it up
    x!x

  • 15 years ago

    by Tyler Durden

    Pretty good!
    Makes me think about my love!

    I think the title should be 'without you'.

  • 15 years ago

    by kayle

    Wow that poem makes me think about me and my ex.. everything is true..
    i think you should keep trying if you really are in love...

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