THINK about the things i say
take them to your gave
never again will my soul be the same
During the Chronicles of my dying day.

THINK about the things i say
take them to your grave
never again will my soul be the same
During the Chronicles of my dying day.

did you mean grave?

very intense poem I lke it

Creative. i like the five senses idea. its deep too. good job and keep writing :)

xxevilangelxx

Very intense, very emotional. i love it. great flow, great structure. 5/5

Wow nicely done! Intense and well written. I enjoyed how the poem is centered around the 5 senses. 5/5