Very good poem!!
you write extremely beautifully

although it didnt rhyme (i prefer ones which do) i found this very interesting and beautifull.
when i read it i found myself thinking alot about whats happened to me.. aswel of thinking about the poem..
poems like that are the best, for thats what poems are for (in my opinion)

i loved the last line
'Don't cry because it's over, smile because it happened.'

so very true..

i love your insight on it all

keep up the good work!!
5/5

I can really relate to this poem It makes me want to smile You have a way with words

Very nice piece, not too long not too short, no forced rhyming and no obnoxious run on sentences. Very relatable and interesting style of questioning the audience. I totally love the message 'Don't cry because it's over, smile because it happened.' That's soo my motto, Smile

People don't cry because the person is gone
they don't cry for what has been lost
tears come from what will never be
for those that will never know
just how great of a person you were
they will never here your laughter
see your smile or feel your courage
They do not cry for saddness of a life gone
dut rather for the ones who wern't lucky enough to be touched by someone like you

sorry your poem kinda reminded me of ^ and I thought that I'd give you ideas for a next one
great job.

This is really cute. =] i really liked it alot, and i smiled through it all when i was reading it because i knew where you were going to go with it. and it does get the message across to people when they are feeling down about anything., like it was said just remember the good times and glad it happened.

keep it up.
keep on writing.
love always and forever.

Wow. This is amazing. I'd be lying if I were to say anything other than I loved this completely. I love the emotion I feel was put into it. Everything in this was perfect.

"So whenever you look back at frowning memories, always remember to say to yourself:
'Don't cry because it's over, smile because it happened.' "

^^ The ending was flawless. I love this quote, too. And I think it was used amazingly well in this piece.

5/5

-Briana

This line" Have you ever had your heart broken,
but you didn't realize you were better off without them?"

It took me around 3 years to realize that i was better off without them. Love is very powerful and is hard to overcome lost love. 5/5

Arent we all asking teh same question , jsut when the mempries trun to be your present and your future,

smiles seem soo far dream
good work