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What a great poem.

5/5.

Nice poem ", 5/5 I lyked this 1 a lot =D

I found myself smiling when I read your poem. The words always come when you don't expect them. Loved your ending.
Take Care Cindy

Oh wow, this is nice, like the rhymes, makes your work great. Nicely thought of and well written. Keep up.

OMG! I GET LIKE THAT EVERY NIGHT TOOO... BUT I JUST DONT WRITE A POEM UNTIL SOMETHING BAD HAPPENS.. I GUESS...

AS A MATTER OF FACT IT HAPPENED TODAY IN CLASS. BUT IF INALLY GOT IT OUT. =]

I LIKE THIS POEM LADY, YOU DID A BEAUTIFUL JOB AND I LOVE THE FLOW AND WORDS " YOUR LIFE CAN NEVER BE PRE-WRITTEN" YOUR SO RIGHT...

5/5

OH AND THANK YOU FOR THE LOVELY COMMENT ON MY POEM, LOL ... YOU KNOW WHICH ONE "I GOT TO GO TO THE POTTI''...

Wow...this was really good...and very true...

Dude thats really good and true!!!! 5/5